You know I have this penchant for leaving poetic comments when I come across a really inspiring poem. Sometime I am rewarded by a poetic answer. A poetic dialogue ensues, which can turn into a spontaneous co-write like this one, between Penfold18, & me.


Poet and the Angel Of Grace.

Graham Jones:
An angel of grace
With beauty to spare
Eyes of pure amber
And velvet soft hair
So lithe and so sleek
Her skin soft and white
A vision from heaven
A breath taking sight
Full of love and compassion
Faith and desire
She touches my heart
With fingers of fire
She harbours my soul
In sweet dreams of bliss
Awaiting with fervour
The touch of her kiss
To send me to heaven
Or condemn me to hell
This Russian roulette
Cast under her spell.

Zoya Zaidi:
To take you into the realm of fantasy,
To show you what heaven on earth can be,
To touch your soul with amber fire,
To feed you with the honey of love,
To give the much desired solace,
Be with you in your hour of need,
Soothe you when your soul is worried,
Oh, how I wish, I was that Angel of Grace,
Oh, your love for a moment to taste!

Graham Jones:
This angel of grace, should I render a clue
I was reading your poetry, maybe thinking of you
So faraway writing words that inspire
Instills in me warmth and all things I admire
So I put pen to paper and let the words flow
And this sort of popped out, so now that you know
So when I can't write and the words will not rend
I just think of dear Zoya my poetical friend :-))

Zoya Zaidi:
Wow, I never knew that was true?
That I was the Angel of Grace for you?
It was just a wild wish I made,
That may be I could be the angel of grace,
Lo, and behold, it has come out to be true,
That I indeed am the Angel of grace for you!
But I'm sure you are saying that to keep my heart,
'Cause, I know, I don't deserve such a part.
Your Angel of Grace must be close to you!
Be with you when you need her true,
What can I do from thousands of miles away?
Except wish that you are well and gay!


Authors: Zoya Zaidi and Penfold18
India and Syria
Copyright©: Zoya Zaidi and Penfold18




Poetry by Zoya Zaidi
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Written on 2006-05-23 at 06:21

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Christoffer Waye
These poems are amazing!!!!!!
I simply love this co.write you guys ROCK :D
2006-06-10


Pamela A Lamppa
What an amazing collaboration. From two of my favs. :o) Wonderful work. ~Pam
2006-05-31


Teala
Beautiful and touching:)
2006-05-28


Shas Ramlogan
This is absolutely beautiful. Such flowing words of affection and captivating imagery. The respect that i have for both poets involved has soared. Great contribution as always, Zoya.
2006-05-24



penfold and zoya
poetry for yah!
filled with wonderment
joy in abandonment
beautiful spontaneities :_)
2006-05-24


Dave Glavin
That is a great right.I love the feelings and visions I got from it.I know I have greatly enjoyed my conversations and critism I have gotten from both of you.Your opinions matter to me. :)
Peace to you both,
Dave
2006-05-23


Kathy Lockhart
This is amazing. The talent, the sweetness, the purity of loving friends. Thank you both for sharing here. It lifts me up to Heaven's door. :))) kathy
2006-05-23


Zoya Zaidi
My dear Graham, we can go on,
You call me an Angel, and I blush on.
We keep exchanging these words of grace,
Like this forever in cyber space.
From you to me, then from me to you,
Sparks keep flying forever and anew.
We understand each other so well,
One can predict what the other would tell,
We can anticipate each other's mood,
For thought, what better can there be food?
But, if we just happen to meet one day,
It's quite possible; we have nothing to say,
We would stare at each other in sheer delight,
And would be dumb founded by our funny plight,
Oh, I can very well imagine that day,
When, two old friends meet for the first time, one day.

**Hugs dear Graham, I am enjoying this**
Love, xxx,Zoya
2006-05-23


penfold18
Dearest Zoya you are so sweet
Who knows one day,we may even meet
The words you write will never perish
And those to me, I will always cherish
For though we are as worlds apart
You hold a place close to my heart
My poetic friend you'll always be
For you bring out the best in me
May your words live on in cyber space
You truely are an Angel Of Grace.
2006-05-23


Malin Johansson
This one I really enjoy reading, so truly words comes from you both, and Zoya you are an angel of grace, never hesitate on that... Two good poets writting a poem, that can only be one thing, GOOD!!:))
Rgds from me
2006-05-23


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
and a wonderful co write between the two of you

rgds mike
2006-05-23


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
hey Zoya this poem is aqwonderful tribute to a very nice man he is a true English gentleman

rgds mike
2006-05-23



Zoya! make sure you back up all your files!
That was a stunning read :_)
2006-05-23


Zoya Zaidi
Dear friends, my computer is threatening to crash. Don't know how long I would be away? So, I am leaving you with this dialogue between me and Granam Jones, Penfold18, a poet par excellence, and one of my dearest poet friends here on the bay.
Love, xxx, Zoya
2006-05-23