Ah, found a SUNSHINE poem that I wrote- Jan 9, 2014


Winter's Nice Day

"Sure is nice today
Sun shining bright
On houses and stuff-
...Real nice"

"Yah man, but it's cold!"

"But it's not storming
No plows, no cars in
ditch, or slamming
into each other-
Sun shining bright-
...Real pretty

"Yah man, but it's cold!
Thermometer hasn't
creeped up a bit!
Did that needle
slip down a notch?
...Man, it's cold!"

"Sure is nice today
Sun shining bright
on houses and stuff
But I'm going in-
.....I'm freezing!"




Poetry by Helen Paquin The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2017-11-22 at 14:38

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Ashe The PoetBay support member heart!
You made me want to get my winter clothes out of moth ball, this was so cold. I remember those sunny cold days that will fool you with the bitter cold. Excellent descriptions!
Ashe
2017-11-23


Sameen
Ah, the duality of winter! Everything is so beautiful but also damn freezing. Nice poem.
2017-11-22