evening

 

often alone   colin

working

long hours   i walk

my

 

evening walk   to

golden hills   over

my shoulder

ancestors see what i see   as god 

 

sketches the view   the

breeze

holds my attention

the sound   the

 

chill   an absence

of heat

dry grass rustling   aural

 

manifestation

of breeze   

 

~

 

golden hills   live

oaks

pass me by   i pass them by

alone

 

hardly

less alone

a still life

unstill   

 

a scape of more than land

it is

as i choose   

a family reunion   a temple   

 

a cacophony   distant

traffic   

nearby birdsong   grass

shushing

 

shadow trailing longer

narrower

to the east   sun

low

 

miming my antics

should 

i chose antic   somber

should i choose 

 

somber

rhythmical   should i choose that

 

~

 

still moments

bring 

deafening babel   

unsettle

 

my mind

touch terror   i am

alive   

miming

 

breeze driven golden

grass   stout

oak limbs

look up   passing clouds

 

look   birds

look

 

~

 

were colin with me

he would see   

hear   

be   as i am

 

we are alike that way

 

 

 

 

 

 





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Written on 2017-12-02 at 17:19

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Jamsbo Rockda The PoetBay support member heart!
I enjoyed this very much. It flows so well.
2017-12-08



image after pleasant image mixed with sensory sensations. Colin came back. indescribably beautiful evening stanzas. Love those the best, though it's hard to choose.
Ashe
2017-12-03


Bibek The PoetBay support member heart!
Loved the sensory details. Felt like I too was walking beside you and cherishing the calm evening.
2017-12-03


Ann Wood The PoetBay support member heart!
Smiles I am happy too Jim it is really lovely one poem, I enjoying your writing my friend.
2017-12-03


Ann Wood The PoetBay support member heart!
I love it Jim, it is show us how colin often is working alone long hours and you walk yours evening walk to golden hills.
2017-12-03