FIRST LOVE

FIRST LOVE
SEASON OF WINTER TIME OF SNOW AND ICE
I SAW AN ANGEL PLAYING WITH AN ICE
HER BLUE EYES AND BEAUTIFUL SMILE
HER LONG AND LOVELY HAIR FACE WAS LIKE SNOWHITE
ONCE I LOOK HER MADE ME HYPLOTISE
MY HEART WAS JUMPING AND TRYING TO FLY
I DIDNOT SLEPT TILL VERY LATE REMBERING HER BEAUTIFUL FACE
NEXT MORNING IN PARK SHE CAME AFTER MY LONG WAIT
I WAS JUST DREAMING WITH HER I DIDNOT KNEW WHEN SHE WENT
FROM THAT DAY I NEVER SAW HER I WAS WAITING IN PARK FOR HER AND THIS IS THE STORY OF MY FIRST LOVE.....................................




Poetry by pratik adhikari
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Written on 2017-12-16 at 06:17

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Ashe The PoetBay support member heart!
Who doesn't like the innocence of first love? This is a very nice poem with some lovely imagery.
Ashe
2017-12-16


pratik adhikari
thanks a lot
2017-12-16


Bibek
Good effort, Pratik. Welcome to Poetbay.
2017-12-16


josephus The PoetBay support member heart!
Very nice, Pratik.
2017-12-16


ken d williams The PoetBay support member heart!
I lovely work of love, Pratik (Adhikari). Welcome to poetbay.
Ken
2017-12-16