a poem written with an anonymous poet on this site long ago in the dark winter but we found joy in the writing of this. It is about the joy of special friendship.


Whirling

Whirling
all around us
as on tiny tiptoes,
white snowflakes of joy fill the air.
You smile


Then we
Praying snow lasts
For the rest of the day
Find each other in our loving ways
Happy


A flake,
Adventurous,
Creeps inside your collar.
I imagine it running down,
Melting


And I
Surprise you and
Muss your hair playfully
Rubbing handfulls of snow in it
We kiss


And more
And more again...
There is no way to stop
This avalanche started by just
One kiss


Unless
We desisting
Melt the snow around us
Deny and just touch, our fingertips
On fire


And you
Held in my arms
Your safety paramount
In the love I have found for you
Burning





Poetry by lastromantichero
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Written on 2006-05-24 at 09:37

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Kathy Lockhart The PoetBay support member heart!
The innocence of the snowflake and then pow the adventure that begins as it melts down into your collar. I had a feeling something was whirling more than just a playful day in the snow. This was great! kathy
2006-05-24


Zoya Zaidi
Hey Mike, the sweetest co-write ever,
There is pattern there, half Richtameter Like, 2 4 6 8, and then you revert to 2 again,
Very clever indeed!

That apart, it is the content,
The snow flake metaphor,
The playful inter play of words,
Emotions and Oh, the divine feeling of Love; All this makes for a charming co- write.

Hats off to you and the 'other' of the two!

**Hugs to you and the 'other' of you two**

Slowly do the emotion reveal, the real truth...
Love, xxx, Zoya
**Bookmarked!**
2006-05-24


Malin Johansson
This one I really liked, this one is bookmarked... This one really got me... beautiful, beautiful...
RGDS
2006-05-24


penfold18
Almost fairy tale like beautiful through out Mike.
2006-05-24