Trying to write Haiku........seems hard to me, a comment I made on second reading seemed to be

Trying to

Concise and to the point
Im trying

Haiku by John holliday
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Written on 2018-02-11 at 03:41

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Ashe The PoetBay support member heart!
Ok, it's a try. But you write such good poems on free verse. :)

I always thought a Haiku had to follow the formula:
5 syllables on the first line
7 syllables on the second
5 syllables on the last line.

I think that's probably not true of all haikus, but it might help when putting one together.

Ashe :)