For My Astronomer


You are sun and I am the moon.

You shine throughout the day,

And I glimmer at night.

Then on those occasions,

When we align

The whole world

Stares in awe of our eclipse.

Ashe




Poetry by Ashe The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2018-02-17 at 17:59

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yes, kant can The PoetBay support member heart!
very bad poem
you should lie better
2018-06-23


Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
Great metaphor, also a sweet poem.
2018-02-20



Very good, Ashe.
2018-02-18


Jamsbo Rockda The PoetBay support member heart!
Beautiful. You know that you are not allowed to look at an eclipse with the naked eye. So you will have privacy :)
2018-02-18


John holliday
Perfectly aligned words and thought....
2018-02-18


josephus The PoetBay support member heart!
Beautiful, Ashe. Simply elegantly, beautiful.
2018-02-17