Insta Poetry

 

A voice from the dark is sneering at me.

I am meddling with some of my old poems.

Out in the bluish cyberspace, poetry rushes free,

Mocking at the years I have wasted, learning

The craft, writing and rewriting the endless drafts.

 

Fragmented aphoristic lines with doodles—

Found in the margins of old school books—

Now scream from every computer screen.

I brood in this room: is it 1984 all over again?

Or is it my psychedelic view of reality?

 

Watered down metaphors stare at me, goggle-eyed.  

A toxic mix of rawness and idiocy sweeps across

The virtual world. I tremble in cold loneliness.

I read the bywords for bad quality, and ask—

Who gave poetry the freedom to be flawed?

 

Denying the metrical, rhythmic nexus, words swirl

In a vortex of erratic line breaks. Flamingo-tall,

They chatter from their cushioned nests, claiming

To be a part of new Renaissance. Their coral legs

Disturb me, they scratch the heart of a keyboard poet.

 

Banal melancholic voice reaches a crescendo.

From the wastebasket of cliches, I pick up a line

Of hard-won truth masquerading as slurred advice.

I chisel it and try to give it a shape, still—

It doesn’t give up the job of being an agony aunt.  

 

From the bogland of social media, it hollers and cries

The joy of being alive. Its consumptive fervor whirls

The craft I once learned into a fierce decay. My words melt

Like greasy garbage down the kitchen sink. Time has no pity

For me in this world of insta poets.

 

Bibek Adhikari 





Poetry by Bibek
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Written on 2018-02-25 at 13:16

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2018-03-05


Ashe The PoetBay support member heart!
I try not to look back, but once in a while it's good and I can be surprised. Some are good, some I thought were good are awful! Enjoyed reading this.
Ashe
2018-02-27



I have had to rewrite some of my old poems, to make them read
better. Guess you learn as you keep writing. Keep writing.
2018-02-26


Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
This is why I don't read my old poems. Nicely done.
2018-02-25