Chiseling into the Sea

Thunderously loud,
the glacier chisels into
the cold, arctic sea!




Haiku by Ngoc Nguyen The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2018-05-08 at 07:17

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Marie Cadavieco The PoetBay support member heart!
Enjoyable twist, at the end of this haiku, with the iceberg chiselling into the sea, rather than the sea eating away the iceberg. Perfectly true to the form, to see it from a new angle. I enjoyed reading this very much.
2018-05-08