A Triolet

 

When I first saw you, I did not know

That love would flutter inside my heart,

And slowly its wings would flit and glow.

When I first saw you, I did not know

That love’s persistent speechless woe

Would peck and vex each inward part.

When I first saw you, I did not know

That love would flutter inside my heart.

 

 

Bibek Adhikari 





Poetry by Bibek
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Written on 2018-05-15 at 13:42

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Rajesh Budhathoki
Bibek ji,

Wow I loved it.

When I first saw you, I did not know
That love would flutter inside my heart.
2018-05-30


Ngoc Nguyen The PoetBay support member heart!
A model triolet and ideal template to imitate and learn from, in my opinion!
2018-05-18


Ashe The PoetBay support member heart!
You are becoming really good at the triolet--and a lovely poem as well. Well done.
Ashe
2018-05-16


Thomas DeFreitas The PoetBay support member heart!
Lovely!
2018-05-16


Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
Nicely done.
2018-05-16