I Hear You Sing

On the breeze, I hear you sing,
your song so very soft
and perhaps I'll borrow a broken dream
that someone else has lost

For the wind it seems to sing your song,
or perhaps that's just what I would like to hear,
and the shadows deceive, for I do believe,
sometimes I can hear you singing here.

Poetry by Ashe The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2018-06-26 at 16:24

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France England
The beauty of this heart to mirror confession of the soul sent me and my better half into a whirlwind of courtship; we haven't kissed like this in a long time. You caused us to weep because your song of love arrived without notice; even Cupid was caught off guard. Your ability to express the devotion that runs through your veins can surely quinch the manliness of any soft hearted desperado. May true forever love double park where you reside. Thank you for this easy Sunday afternoon. If we had to claim a single line to be our favorite that couldn't be done so like the air we breathe we've taken it all in. Sigh

Shamshad Alam
Lovely poem... Indeed true we hear the voices of our loved ones when they are not around us, when they are far away from us and even when we have no hope to meet them again.

Jamsbo Rockda The PoetBay support member heart!
Oh this is so good. Both stanzas are so well constructed and the last skips along to the sound of the song. I can almost hear it myself and I have a bag full of broken dreams :)

Ivan R
Lovely, lovely, lovely. Such a marvelous poem*

Soft and sweet.

one trick pony The PoetBay support member heart!
sweet simplicity ~

Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
Well done!

Yes, the voice so crisp and warm. Singing for you. As if I am also sitting somewhere and listening. Beautiful

antoniya katelieva-wood The PoetBay support member heart!
You are welcome my dear friend.

antoniya katelieva-wood The PoetBay support member heart!
Lovely poem well done Ashe, I hear you sing