tales told in passing


i have been enamored

by clouds

of late   thinking   until now   


how common   in fact   how rare   

in the city   

glimpsed from our apartment window   


from the street   between tall buildings    

in parks   

obscured by trees   only now   


at the vineyard   golden hills


to the horizon   do i see clouds floating free   


telling ever-changing tales

in passing





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Written on 2018-06-28 at 04:50

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antoniya katelieva-wood The PoetBay support member heart!
That day I were flight to Bulgaria and watching the clouds, when I get very Ill. This poem remind me that horrible day for me, but I love it Jim write it so beautifully like always. Well done Jim great job my dear friend. Hugs Ann Wood.

Elle The PoetBay support member heart!
I was doing some cloud watching today, we had the fair weather ones that hang like wisps:-) enjoyed this contemplative write.

Elle x

The form of this is so clever! I also enjoyed the tone here: calm, pensive. Great job!

So sweet, these clouds- always a surprise

I am enamored of your poem: its form, its flow, its everything.