Trying out a new style. Simple, but it has some depth and structure. I'll get there. :)


Last Night I Had A Dream About You



Last night I had a dream about you
It was so sweet to be again with you
Working and writing like I did with you
I always knew there was something very special about you


Last night I had a dream about you
And one day soon Iíll share it with you
About how the stars shined brightly over you
How the world shifted into place with you


Last night I had a dream about you
While my heart sang melodic tunes to you
When we kissed I melted right into you
How you made my body feel that I knew you



Last night I had a dream about you
Itís funny how time flies when I am with you
Because I saw beginning to end me and you
As time passed being with just you



Last night I had a dream about you
We needed no one else when together, me and you
My dream made lasting memories with you
Even as I knew my knight in shining armor would never be you



Last night I had a dream about you
And when it was over I remembered the real you
And even as I awoke I knew the dream was just a dream from me to you.
Last night I had a dream about you.
Ashe




Poetry by Ashe The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2018-07-18 at 08:28

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Coo & Co The PoetBay support member heart!
It's fun to try out new styles (-:>)

The repeated first line of each stanza and the 'you' at the end of each line puts members of Coo & Co in mind of a variation on a ballad. Our favourite stanza is the final one, the awakening, subtly anticipated in the final line of the penultimate stanza. We like the concept of a dream as a sort of gift too.
2018-07-23


Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
Nicely done! I didn't see that last stanza coming.
2018-07-18


Jamsbo Rockda The PoetBay support member heart!
Wonderful. Perhaps dreams cross into different dimensions and reach people. they are certainly a different consciousness.
is the repeating first line a type of style or did you decide on it that way? Nice.
2018-07-18