Thoughts while watching water


Water

The water has a rippled sheen
In constant motion always changing

The molecules move in arcane paths
From clouds to snow to mist to wave

Mountain storm hurricane
Desert rain frosted panes

Always searching...




Poetry by josephus The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2018-07-19 at 13:12

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Ashe The PoetBay support member heart!
The song of the water that calls us to our very beginnings. Mesmerizing, hypnotizing, and realizing that water is everything.
The Earth. I enjoyed the feeling of these images.
Ashe
2018-07-21


jim The PoetBay support member heart!
Water is infinitely complex, so many states, so many guises. You've caught its ever-changing, beguiling nature.

I write from the boundary waters of northern Minnesota, water-water everywhere.
2018-07-19


Jamsbo Rockda The PoetBay support member heart!
Good to see you back! Da Vinci said that "water is the driving force of all nature" and used to work out wave structure everywhere else. Perhaps he saw exactly what you have seen and explained in this fine work :)
2018-07-19