Especially When

My heart warms itself

by the breeze-brushed chill-blushed fire

of October leaves.





Poetry by Thomas DeFreitas The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2018-10-18 at 14:55

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Ashe The PoetBay support member heart!
So much said in the abbreviated syllables of a haiku. From warmth to fire to breeze and October's color. Beautiful!
Ashe
2018-10-19


shells
Definitely heartwarming, beautifully descriptive.
2018-10-19


Coo & Co The PoetBay support member heart!
All at Coo & Co very much enjoyed this haiku, Thomas :>)

We appreciate the beauty of nature you showcase here, and we particularly like the internal rhyme in the second line. Coo notes that 'brushed' is pleasingly onomatopoeia-ic (or something). We love 'fire' in connection with the movement of the leaves. And all at Coo & Co didst applaud together. Woo-hoo! :>o
2018-10-18