about D.
My friend told another friend to kill her self when she was really close to doing it.. they were on this trip and were drinking and stuff.. she said she was drunk, but she wasn't.. and no one who's not drunk tell one of her best friends to kil



Fuck you for doing that..

"I was born a bitch"
Yeah you're damn right.
I haven't forgiven you for what you did,
and I think I never will.
Still I pretend like everything is all right.
but I can't tell you I hate you for that.

What you did was stupid,
And I don't think no one will ever forgive you.
fuck you for doing that.
She's your friend, well, not any more I hope.
But you pretend like everything is like it should.

you say you were drunk,
maby you say you don't remember?
But it's not true.
you were faking like a little bitch.
oh my god, you shouldn't been born.

Everyone who knows don't look at you with the same look any more.
thank god.
fuck you for doing that to her...
You ment so much before..
Now, you're dust..




Poetry by kittipuusen
Read 595 times
Written on 2006-05-29 at 19:57

dott Save as a bookmark (requires login)
dott Write a comment (requires login)
dott Send as email (requires login)
dott Print text


lynn
holy shit i love the anger in this poem and you really expressed yourself!!! great write i hope to read another one soon!!
amber lynn
2006-05-31


theo
I can't see how swearing can portray the most intense feeling of anger or despair.
I would advise you to describe the feeling in other words,so the reader maybe gets the same.
2006-05-30


liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
I LOVE the anger in this -
such an honest straight from the heart write.

and rigth should be right [i'm a bad speller myself]

LOVE this poem.

liz.
2006-05-30


Christian Ward
ouch!

acerbic write
2006-05-29