The Twilight Roller-coaster

One day the night refused to come
He was fed up with the dark
He hitched a ride to Everlight Land
A far away amusement park
To ride on the twilight roller-coaster
Until his head began to spin
So when he finally turned up to work
Daylight was ready to begin
He told the sun that he must lie down
To stop his world all turning
While night can be deep as cassareep
Dizzy darkness is concerning




Poetry by Jamsbo Rockda The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2019-01-09 at 12:25

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Jamsbo Rockda The PoetBay support member heart!
Thank you Kathy Lockhart, ken d williams and Bibek for the applauds
2019-01-11


Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
Nicely done!
2019-01-09


Kathy Lockhart The PoetBay support member heart!
I can't stop reading this. I think I'm on the Twilight Roller-coaster and it's taking me on a thrill trip around, over, and through all the aspects of this awesome poem. I read it silently. I read it out loud. I get all these ideas and pictures and boom! I'm on it again! I love the word "cassareep" now, a word I never knew existed before. Now I'm all involved in what it is and how it sounds. Well you have my head spinning. I'll get back in line so I can take another ride. :)
thanks!
2019-01-09