This has nothing to do with my recent absence...it was the computer that crashed! But...


Emerging from Hibernation

Sometimes for days at a stretch
I go around like a Zombie.
Things happen around me,
As if they're happening to someone else,
World goes on round me,
As if it's not my world...

And I am just lost in my own world.
But in my mind goes on
Turmoil of sorts;
My thoughts race at top speed and
Vie with each other
To gather a place in the forefront
of my consciousness:
Some are hazy, some premature,
Some are jumbled up.
Some even are like juvenile delinquents.

Some die a premature death,
Some join hands with others
to become a part of a whole concept.

But some persist and persevere,
Gain strength to become
An obsession of sorts;
They mature from a tender seed
and take root
in the gyri and insuli of my brain
to become an idea, a vision
Take me into their grip and
Don't leave me at all
Till I am compelled to
put them down with my broken quill,
on yellowing parchment-
figments of my imagination in black ink-

And they call it poetry...

I do not really know,
What it is...
Does my mind hibernate?
And comes out renewed, refreshed...
Or is it in a state or intellectual slumber,
Necessary is some rest...
But I just love it, because
Sometimes when I emerge
From the deep sea of thought
I have in my hand a precious pearl of sorts...


Author: Zoya Zaidi
Aligarh (UP), India
Copyright: Zoya Zaidi





Poetry by Zoya Zaidi
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Written on 2006-05-30 at 13:48

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Stan Cooper The PoetBay support member heart!
Hi Zoya... you did it again...

"I have in my hand a precious pearl of sorts..."

That line describes your poem perfectly

xxxx Stan
2008-12-03


liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
And I love your pearls.

liz
2006-06-12


Teala
Don't I know these feelings well...we are kindred spirits..
2006-06-01


she
This has everything to do with me!!!I actually used to call it "my mind block" but now you put it in such a beautiful way that I have actually started appreciating each precious moment of those Zombie-like moments........I guess it is how we poets grow......
2006-05-31


Malin Johansson
I really liked this one...
I loved the last stanza...it's sais it all about the poem...
Rgds
2006-05-31



hi there ZOYA...I have nothing to say about this poem but 100 % real...very good poem..I like this!!!!
2006-05-31


Mr.Mist
Sweet Zoya, once again your writing have amazed me. I got a smile on my face when i saw you was back on the bay...i missed reading your poems, and then you come back, with a piece better than ever...im stunned...

-mr.m
2006-05-31



sorry for the puter, happy to see you back!
This poem could be permanently put on the first side of the bay!
2006-05-30


theo
"Take me into their grip and
Don't leave me at all
Till I am compelled to
put them down with my broken quill,
on yellowing parchment-
figments of my imagination in black ink-

And they call it poetry..."

- what an apt choice of words!
2006-05-30


Kathy Lockhart
How lovely are your thoughts about your thoughts. It is always good to read what has been hibernating up there in your brilliant brain. I am glad your computer is awake so all those precious pearls can link themselve together and become a delightful piece of jewelry for us all to admire. Thank you. :) kathy
2006-05-30


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
Hi there doctor glad you are back again and we could never forget you well done on this brilliant return piece xxxx dont mind a kiss or two do you lololol xx two more for luck
2006-05-30