My first ever haiku. Thought I try it.


Sweden!

Crystal tree chiming

Monotony bound

Winter is coming



Haiku by Sipora
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Written on 2019-02-21 at 16:14

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Bibek The PoetBay support member heart!
I like the effort and the use of "nature" in haiku. I also like the format of 5-5-5 syllables in each line. Do you know that there is another oftentimes used format of 5-7-5 also?
2019-02-23


KYREUS of Sweden The PoetBay support member heart!
...and now, late february,
SPRING as well

Praise the Lord!
2019-02-21