You and a cigarette




On a cigarette filter I write your name

Before I empty the ashtray

I take a look at the ashes
that you left behind

But a new day is coming

I throw everything
to the waste disposal

You are nothing to me

I light a cigarette
and
inhale the smoke

The pain you made me feel
will last as much as this cigarette

5 Minutes

This is how much you...



Poetry by night soul woman The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-05-30 at 20:26

Tags Anger  Love  Pain 

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Zoya Zaidi
A very good imagery a metaphor of a cigarette!

By the way today is
"World against smoking day!"
may be you should light up somethging else to drive away your blue?

Advise from a doctor friend...

Love, xxx, Zoya
2006-05-31


lynn
oh my god this poem was fantastic i love it!!!! this is brillant i am bookmarking this poem and its way better than a 5!!!
amber lynn
2006-05-30