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NOTE: 2006 06 09 13H25 EST *In Worship of Your Beauty* - writing exercise inspired by In Worship of Your Beauty by M.A. Meddings..not my usual, but i tried ;)




*In Worship of Your Beauty*


The sweet reminiscence
Of your delicate fragrance:
Smoothly down my neck and my spine go
Shivers that embalmed every side of heart,
And orchestrated every possible liberty.
Our dreams sang of wondrous infinity,
And released from the shadings of time,
Nothing could ever match the purity of joy
Which flooded our minds of sublime affinity.

Our hands joined in unity, unchallenged,
All of our tender kisses spent, a treasury.
Our love has now become an unprinted story,
But the rush of ecstacy lives on forevermore,
And preciously safe-guarded inside soft melodies,
Our finer moments are the lifeline of memory...
Instinctly natural, released from all earthly worries,
Came our way swirling flutters of gentle life, happy -
In the worship of your beauty, I learned to be free.





Words by F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-06-09 at 19:37

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Louise 55 The PoetBay support member heart!
How amazingly wonderful written. Namaste.
2017-03-29


Rik The PoetBay support member heart!
Truly a magical piece of romantic writing. Really cannot get better than this. A joy to read :-)
2014-11-10


Chaucer Whethers The PoetBay support member heart!
:) Absolutely Gorgeously Inspiring!
I love having this library full of incredible surprises written by a fine friend such as you.
2014-08-02



Excellent love poem, like it!
2014-03-19


Morning Star
What a beautiful poem. The wording is exquisite.

Truly touches the heart with its poetic muse.
2012-07-23


ngaio Beck
Must add my words to the throng. An excellent love poem.I am envious. I never have,(nor could I ever) feel this way. As you know,poetically,that is a severe handicap'
2011-03-25


Damon
An excellent love poem that you have written, and an excellent one to read as well.
Damon
2009-11-22


Thomas Perdue The PoetBay support member heart!
Congratulations on the editor's choice!
I always thought this one deserved it, I find it to be one of the best love poems I have ever read. I admire your use of wording here, how descriptive you are in each individual line, and rounding it off to a most beautiful closing line.
Great work!

I hope you are well,
T.
2008-11-27


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*Congratulations*

Your text has been chosen by the Editors to receive a Gold Star!

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2008-11-17


Zoya Zaidi
Hey, I did not realise I had read it earlier,
I enjoyed it even better this time,
Like the old wine,
Gets better with time....
(((Hugs dear F.i. in.e)))
Love, Zoya
2007-05-11


Zoya Zaidi
How absolutely lovely, Darling F.i.in.e
As I was reading I kept saying to myself,
This s my favourite line, then I would read the next and say,
No, this is even better, and so on and so on...
I could not choose one over the other,
They are all so good! Perfect!
Each chiselled with the delicate fragrance of you love!
You love with all your heart and soul!
May your happiness stretch to infinity!
From infinity to eternity...
Forever and forever more...
All the best to you!!!!!
(((Big fond hugs for this masterpiece)))
**Bookmarked**
Love, Zoya
2007-05-11


Elle The PoetBay support member heart!
I agree with ardent - a feeling of great serenity did come over in this - I could be wrong but it was like a great rush of acceptance and joy. You are a talented writer and I am so glad to have read your words

Elle x
2007-04-30


Elle The PoetBay support member heart!
I agree with ardent - a feeling of great serenity did come over in this - I could be wrong but it was like a great rush of acceptance and joy. You are a talented writer and I am so glad to have read your words

Elle x
2007-04-30


ardent.March
This poem is so beautiful and serene, I love the title.
All of our tender kisses spent, a treasury.
Our love has now become an unprinted story,
But the rush of ecstacy lives on forevermore,
~ I like those lines.
2007-03-26


salem
oh so great
2007-03-20


Individuality
thought i would revisit this, it is good to see a poem that is full of smiles here.
2007-02-23


Individuality
:)
2007-02-20


Amanda K
That was fair.How you cherished feelings here and embraced passion with metaphores uniqely put 2gther along with music.Well-done.
2006-09-09


Troll
for not being your usual sort of writing, you certainly have a knack for it... the last line... no wait, all of them...

8^D
2006-08-05


Veld Cooper
This is absolutely breathtaking work! Blew me clean away. Will have to return for MUCH more!
Veld
2006-07-11


lastromantichero
hey i am honoured that you found my words inspiring and you have produced a thoroughly lovely and even better text

well done
in my favs rgds Michael
2006-07-10



This read made many things within me resound again. A little painful and almost too beautiful. In my favs at once!
2006-06-10


Zoya Zaidi
This is beautiful and divine!
So, much better than mine!
Tears of joy fil my eyes
When I read this piece
bettering mine!

Thanks for this gem!
Hey Mike, how about answering this, I am sure you are speechless by this beauty!

**hugs**

Love, xxx, Zoya
2006-06-10


Teala
BEAUTIFUL and touching--I love this poem!
2006-06-10


haseen whel
"In the worship of your beauty, I learned to be free"...woderful my dear...once again ..very nice poetry!!! kissess
2006-06-10


Kathy Lockhart The PoetBay support member heart!
This has been an awesome day of wonderful love-filled words. Inspiration is flowing like mother's milk to her baby! Beautifully done. f. :) kathy
2006-06-09


lastromantichero
hey there fine moods
this is so beautiful and sincere
and i am honoured to have inspired this work i am in awe of your words
regards mike
2006-06-09


Rik The PoetBay support member heart!
A wonderfully enchanting text, full of soft and gentle imagery. Really enjoyed this read.
2006-06-09