After listening to a track by The Velvet Underground. The use of the word 'spike' duly acknowledged


She's my hero...


hero Anne

she's all i ever wanted her to be
she put a spike in my mind
laid my dreams in front of me
she's a living walking hero
hero Anne
she is all i ever wanted
an all consuming
reality.

So tease me and please me
my burlesque vamp
undress my soul
seduce me and enchant
a cabaret of desires
lay bursting on my tongue
to electrify your body
blue fantasies
everyone.

© Rik - 26/06/2006



Poetry by Rik The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-06-27 at 02:53

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F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
yep heheh ;) ... i also think the language used in this is excellent... you have this ability to create incredible imagery - so very good yeah *nods* :) ... this makes me think of a few friends that were in my life... you really describe the dynamic well... the reality... sent me back in time for sure... thanks for sharing :f

*hug* xx
2006-06-27



I wonder... What colour are my tongue's fantasies?...
2006-06-27


Malin Johansson
A very good poem here Rik!!!
she sounds beautiful in your beautiful poem...:))
Regards
2006-06-27


Zoya Zaidi
Wow! Rikky, this is unusual style for you! Yet, absolutely 'You'!
Love, it!
***Hugs and welcome back***
Love, xxx, Zoya
2006-06-27


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
hi there Rik a beautiful poem and again the images of burlesque vamp is sublime well done rgds mike
2006-06-27


Kathy Lockhart
Great Writing and a wonderful experience reading it. You have talent...lots of it! :) kathy
2006-06-27


Amanda Manmohan
Excellent write. I especially enjoyed the second stanza. Well done :)
2006-06-27


Mr.Mist
hi Rik...I dont seemto get enough of your poetry..havent red one piece that i didnt like..and this was another one i liked so much i had to bookmark it...This poem made me think bout someone I think of as special, almost like a "hero"...in a (weird) way...but it made me feel good...Thanx for shearing this...

-mr.m
2006-06-27