i wrote this in grade 6. my 2nd poem ever written so be nice. the teacher liked it so much my class had to perform it infront of the whole school for earth day. yes, as you can imagine i wasnt so popular after that.


see how the earth used to be

pick an apple off a tree

see how the earth used to be

take a walk down memory lane

see mother earth's true pain

to be hurt to be burnt

to be choked with all the smoke

and all the cutting down of trees

see how the earth used to be

before there was you or me

before there wa seven a trace

of the human race...

beautiful birds and bushes

fabulous feilds and forests..

see how the earth used to be.




Poetry by andrea
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Written on 2006-06-29 at 06:02

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Kathy Lockhart
Wow! Wow! No wonder she had them perform this! It is beyond Excellent! :) kathy
2006-06-29