Truth hits sky

Truth hits sky in a
Shooting star that's but a
Broken sattelite



Haiku by lou bergs
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Written on 2005-08-22 at 01:10

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Esti D-G The PoetBay support member heart!
Double wow! love it!
estix
2007-08-14


cory Crook
nice i can imagine this this is a good short poem or whatever the bleep ya callsit
2005-11-19


Commentally Ill
oh, so that's why the t.v. isn't working :P

c.i.
2005-08-22


epohonci
profound, well-written, beautiful...

~me
2005-08-22


TheGreatKazoo
nice, dum-dum, however in my world it's usually Sky that hits, crashing in on Truth to bury it. shooting stars of beauty, I see in this.
2005-08-22