(words , how I dislike you )


I am no poet


I move my tongue
around used words

waiting to be exposed
while they pile up outside my gate


___

I no longer trust you

I want to scrape you off me
scrape
scrape

down to my bare numbers



Poetry by Lourdes
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Written on 2006-07-11 at 15:08

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Amanda K
loooooooolll lKool.
2006-09-01


Julie Zerbe
There's something about this I find sort of amusing, even though the tone is calm. I particularly like the phrase "bare numbers", but I can say that this poem is highly unusual and not what I would have expected with that title!
Julie
2006-07-16


English War Veteran aged 98
"I want to scrape you off me "

You been at the Jelly & Custard again?!
2006-07-14



"I want to scrape you off me."
Sometimes it is so with things we love in spite of ourselves.
2006-07-11


Teala
I know these feelings well..sometimes I want to write so bad, but don't have it in me. Great write!
2006-07-11


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
yes you are a poet and a very good one with so many ideas
i wish i could emulate your range well done rgds mike
2006-07-11