yet another poem about luv gone wrong


gave up holding on

it was a love so strong
we were heart to heart.
how did it go wrong?
y did we fall apart?

i loved you
and you loved me
but then it stopped
so suddenly

there were tears in your eyes
but still i held on
it came as a surprise
but i didnt want it to go wrong

but now my heart is broken
you ment too much to me
the sweet words that were spoken
are now just memories

and now im gone
i gave up holding on



Poetry by andrea
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Written on 2006-07-17 at 02:57

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Arti
So wistful... So simple, yet you wring a sigh from me. Lovely write.
True emotions are hard to express. The simplest of words bring out the deepest of emotions.
2006-07-17