Pains Charade




Tears of sorrow

Tears of joy

The only absolutation
of the wounded soul

and
purification

twinkling eyes
by
the moonlight

Past present and Future
join in pains charade

2 teams
past and present
Future and I

4 words

Your

Love

Killed

me!

Your Love killed me!

My turn now!Future whispers in my ear


Butterfly!

+

sun

s h o w

me

my

destination

That doesn't make any sense
(past and present try to find the whole sentence)
- we give up you win!

And I say loud and clear!

Hope and life show me my destination!
I won! and I smile :)

The Future embraces me
and
we jump up and down

in a dance of joy
and Hope joins in our dance





Poetry by night soul woman The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-07-29 at 14:04

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Arti
I love this game of charades....:) Good job! hope you're feeling better....
((hugs))
2006-07-29


Malin Johansson
I can do this dance too :))) beautiful My friend... the pain always fades away and then joy and hope comes in :)))
B E A U T I F U L
~~
Malin
2006-07-29


Kathy Lockhart
Deeply moving, excellent expression of surrender, death, and resurrection into a new strong life! Lots of strength in this poem. Lots of hope! Love the form! xx kathy
2006-07-29


F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
the two spectrums - sorrow and joy mixed in this... but then the end is like a liberation of sorts... i feel it very uplifting really... i liked the part:

"2 teams
past and present
Future and I" -

it caught my attention that one... the past and present, then the future with self - in my mind the imagery i saw each of these things as entities... powerful ones that can determine destiny, or destroy it... depends on the attitude and chosen approach to each of these aspects of life...

this is as always an excellent creation of yours... a delight to read... thanks for sharing :f

*hug* xx
2006-07-29