Two lost souls



When I am writing about you
I can really feel you around me
the sound of your voice and the
feelings of your touch

The tears in your eyes that
shimmering warm and nice
your soul that tell me
I am here for you

And oh my God I gave up you
only for the reason I want to
be alone forsaken myself
on the life's autobahn

And oh my soul it hurts
so much when I remember
what I have done to you
I am so sorry

And I wish that you know
that two lost souls is two enough
and the life is spinning
around the axel of life




Poetry by Dan Cederholm
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Written on 2006-07-29 at 15:21

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Zachary P. B.
"And I wish that you know
That two lost souls is enough"

A wonderful, powerful, beautiful poem Dan. =)

Sorry if you haven't heard much from me lately, I just got back from a holiday. It was wonderful to read another of your poems, as always =)

Zachary
2006-07-29


F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
so much regret in this.. very easy to feel, so palpable, really... you've expressed this grief really well with this text... squeezed my heart some, really... beautiful and caring - hope all is well on your side :f thanks for sharing...

later... xx
2006-07-29


Kathy Lockhart
Your expression of your regret is so real and touching. I love the use of metaphors in describing life. "on the life's autobahn" and then this stanza:
"And I wish that you know
that two lost souls is two enough
and the life is spinning
around the axel of life"
This last one is my favorite. So much love, regret, and lonliness expressed here. xx kathy
2006-07-29