In 5 moments of torture




Torture me
pull my nails

I will not deny
my faith in Love

Torture me
force-feed me

with hate
I will not be

one of you
Torture me

Savage beatings
with tender words

You will not
take my soul

Torture me
expose me

to extreme conditions
I will not

renounce my faith
in humanity

Torture me
Throw me

in the water dungeon
of black emotions

I will not forget
kindness

Torture me
Now you are

an eyewitness
to my power

Torture me
I will not renounce

my faith in love
kindness
humanity

Torture me
you don't

know any better
than this

You are
forgiven





Poetry by night soul woman The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-07-30 at 12:18

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Will
Two traits I admire are conviction and strength this piece exhibits both.
Love the style, love the content, but most of all love the unyielding strength this piece oozes.

POWERFUL INDEED
2006-08-01


Arti
Love is a bad teacher...I never learned anything but forgiveness and submission to God's will...Your torturing was ordained by your love of hate...
Beautiful, awe-inspiring write...
2006-07-31


Malin Johansson
Good poem here dear :))

Torture me
Throw me

in the water dungeon
of black emotions

A powerfull meaning I think :))
great

big hugs
2006-07-30


Dan Cederholm
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Hey there NSWwhata great poem

about love and hate and torture!!

Sioncerely and with hugs to you

Dan

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2006-07-30


Zachary P. B.
I hate you, but love you
So now I forgive you

Humanity on deeper levels. A wonderful poem.

Zachary
2006-07-30