A chance remark inspired this 'tongue in the cheek' poem


Briefly by M.A.Meddings

Briefly
Like ships in the night
We pass
With a signalled
'Thank the lord'
Had we been ships
And met
What collision
Might ensue




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Written on 2006-08-01 at 10:35

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Zachary P. B.
A very beautiful and intelligent poem Mike.

A crash may be bad and dangerous, but what about the person you become because of it? And if not you, think of the other "ship" the other party...

Very thought provoking and masterfully orchestrated.

Z
2006-08-01


Kathy Lockhart
oh yes...sometimes the passing are a blessing but the crashing........Bang! What an experience none-the-less. Concise, Thought-provoking, and Clever. : ) kathy
2006-08-01