Emelén
Awan named Lourdes
Found in the fringes walking
face transparent
clutching a golden feather and a heartshaped stone
2006-08-08

lastromantichero
A lovely cleverly succint little poem your skill is so evident rgds mike
2006-08-03

Arti
Is this an acrostic for "alien"?? Or is it just me?
Beautiful deep write...
2006-08-03

Kathy Lockhart
i love the sound of this as i read it out loud. the words were beautiful just reading them but the sound of it brought a whole mulitude of drums and visions of dance and chanting. Soothing yet haunting. As you can see, this sparked and ignited my thoughts and imagination and done with so few words. I say Excellent! :) kathy
2006-08-02

night soul woman
A good poem here! did you know that :Awan was the daughter of Adam and Eve, and sister of Cain, Abel, and Seth, according to the Book of Jubilees. She is reported to have been the third child born to Adam and Eve, born immediately after Abel in the fifth jubilee, 250-300 years after the creation of Adam and Eve. She is reported to have married her brother Cain, and to have given birth to Enoch, their son. Cain's wife is not mentioned in Genesis. However, Cain and his son Enoch are mentioned.
(wikipedia)
2006-08-02