An attempt to write a song... don`t know how to continue.. if i should continue that is..:P


A new solution

talking about stars shining
faith giving reason
hope as our patriot
love is a treason

giving time to think
drawing new conclusions
holding hearts on a wait
to be neglected

far away in your heart
treasoned by a falling star
there`s a new chemical fusion
opening a new solution

locked in a chamber
in a treasure chest
hidden far away
the love that awaits

so hard the fight
to bring forth a gift
stoned by all others
pressed not to shift




Poetry by Cr4Ky
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Written on 2005-08-28 at 21:48

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chasingtheday The PoetBay support member heart!
giving time to thing - do you mean think?

holding hearts on a wait - not sure with wait being used here.

cheast - chest

figth - fight


it's a good poem/song, just needs a little editing i think.
2005-08-28