Lonely nights on Sunset Boulevard




Sleepless Nights
in Boulevard street.

Every corner
carries it's own dark secret

Sinister nights
on Sunset Boulevard

where loneliness
forgets the meaning

of love and the
selfishness of pain

takes over;
The silent destroyers. ...

She has left
her diamond soul

in a lotus flower
at the Echo park.

Once a year,
a white dragon

travels through
the gray asphalt

of the Sunset Boulevard
and takes her

on his wings
to the land where

dreams are made;
Her love knight

waits for her,
Once a year;

Untill the day
of her death. ..

Endless Nights,
on Sunset Boulevard

the street where she lives
and dies every night.




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Written on 2006-08-08 at 03:54

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Will
Kudos to the gifted
Tremendous piece.
2006-08-08


Malin Johansson
A good poem here and I find it a bit sad...
But a touching and moving poem here!!
Hugs to you my friend
2006-08-08


Dan Cederholm
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Yes thats thrue, she dies every night

there on Sunset Boulevard . . .

And she has left her innocent soul

in the lifegiving Lotus flower!!!

Then the destroying power takes over

her disillilosed life, But once a year

the hope comes back to her . . .

But the lonelynes takes over whole the

time . . . so its gona be moore . . .

Lonely nighhts on Sunset Boulevard!!!

Hugs Dan

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2006-08-08


Teala
Lonesome and dark..very hauntingly beautiful in fact!!
2006-08-08


rider
each line you write is a child born from your mind and travels through the umbilical which connects your soul to the mind...Please, young Poetess, whatever your write, however you feel about it, neve consider abortion...Be at peace...This poem is so riddled with psychological messages...The desire for peace, the need to make sacrifices, of love and pain, of death and war..this is so spiritual, so secret with meaning...I thorough;ly enjoyed it...Lovely...Ron.
2006-08-08


Arti
Wowee. I need to get a garlic clove to keep under my pillow.... to keep the ghosts away!!! lolol
2006-08-08


Zachary P. B.
Every corner
carries it's own dark secret...

i love this, each person each place each story has history background behind it... just in that one line, so much meaning . =)

loved it!
z
2006-08-08



"She has left
her diamond soul"...I love this line...a sad poem but great!!!!kissess
2006-08-08


Kathy Lockhart
OH, the pain and sorrow in this is moves me deeply. Your images are of the lonely and desperate. well done. :) kathy
2006-08-08


keith nunes
it's as though you gave birth to this poem
2006-08-08