I am indebted to Alienas cheeky poem ´Ohh Celebration time´
For reminding me I wrote this previously unpublished poem long before coming to the bay.
I hope it does not offend as it attempts to describe the beauty



Hold On by M.A.Meddings

Hold on my love hold on
The pain will subside
Just watch my eyes
As I will watch yours
And touch lightly
Your lips on mine

Then if you will allow
Open mouths just to brush
Tongue tip to tongue tip
You will amaze
What beauty there is
In our kiss

Move as soft as you can
The pleasure will last
In this dance we invent
Rythmically joining as one
This tango finale
Hold on

Do you see beads of sweat
Trailing my face
Total enchantment with you
And close, so close
That I can touch
Just as I want hold on

Hold on as we kiss
Then move as we do
So perfect in tune
To the sybaritic ringing guitar
For the passion we prove
Hold on

Hold on my love to this moment
Just as we feel the love rush
Then as if it were
The last time
Until the explosion looms
And we come together hold On





Poetry by lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-08-09 at 19:42

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Rik The PoetBay support member heart!
This is really very good, very silky and a very enjoyable read!
2006-08-12


Arti
Beautiful write... No offence meant and no offence taken! :)
2006-08-10


Kathy Lockhart
No offense taken!!!! Perfect poem for yesterday's Celebration Day! Felt that rhythm oh yes i did. Just right! :) kathy
2006-08-10



In a word - sensuous!
2006-08-09


Lourdes
very sensual and extraordinary beautiful , Mi Heroe
2006-08-09


Malin Johansson
A great poem here Father...!!!
I loved the beginning in the poem... GREAT!!!
Regards daugther:))
2006-08-09


Dan Cederholm
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Hey Mike what a great readin here

Hold on my love . . . I love it Mike!!!

Regards Dan

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2006-08-09


Will
Very much enjoyed this piece...
2006-08-09