(tanka) -
lots of grasshoppers in my backyard last night, mmm... that's about it. reminding me of a better place where my love is, where i'd love to hear their song once more.


grasshopper

a violinist
plays his fiddle with my heart
a duet so pure...

play on, little grasshopper
i now see the moon, thank you




Haiku by Zachary P. B.
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Written on 2006-08-09 at 23:08

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Rick Crown
yes. pity to the ones who cannot see the moon. yes. velly good.
2006-10-15


Lourdes
I adored both the imagery and the happy quietness of this tanka. Its perfect !
2006-08-19



I suppose to a grasshopper the starry heavens are much vaster than to our human eyes..... that lends us a new and broader view.... fresh and freeing... :_)
2006-08-18


Teala
This is so beautiful and well done. I love the vibrance and realness you have given us here!!
2006-08-11



A beautiful piece..nicely done dear!!!kissess
2006-08-10


Arti
Beautiful! Amazing! **applause** The Japanese would love this!
2006-08-10


Kathy Lockhart
Special Z, this is bookmarked! Amazing write. Beautiful Tanka. Lovely thoughts. Delight!!! xxx kathy
2006-08-10


night soul woman The PoetBay support member heart!
*lol* I really like this poem!
well done!
2006-08-10