Speaks for itself...


The Spider

There is a spider outside my door

At first he was quite small

But on a diet of beetles, flies

And mosquitos

He has grown quite large

4 times now, he has torn down

His very own web

Only to build another

Nearby

Each one has become more

Intricate, Enchating, and

Amazing

And I thought to myself..

Isn't this what life is all about?

Trying again..trying your best to

To grow up, strike out

And never settle for less?

He may be a pest to some..

But to me..he is a teacher



Poetry by Teala
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Written on 2006-08-13 at 05:03

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Alan J Ripley The PoetBay support member heart!
Bet that spiders all grown up,
As you kept it well fed.
Trading day by day,
On the world wide web.
2023-01-12


Winston Latanafrancia Soldevilla
It is entertaining to read. I like the lesson it teaches. A metaphor of its kind. I believe you're quire right.

"Isn't this what life is all about?

Trying again..trying your best to

To grow up, strike out

And never settle for less?"

Great job!
2007-09-24


Will
Nice Write
2006-08-14


Saga
When you stop learning, you stop growing.
Well done.
2006-08-13


Thomas Selnes The PoetBay support member heart!
As you yourself said; it speaks for itself.

Reminds me of the time I released such an emminent teacher into the jungles of my mother's pot plants. That very same teacher managed to make such a glorious web, that I got all glassy eyed when my mum shrieking like the proverbial banshee, relieved the teacher of her misery and cleaned out her glittery, amazing cobweb.

A metaphore in itself?
2006-08-13


keith nunes
excellent!
2006-08-13