LONELY CROWD


Today I found a shattered soul.
Fragmented heart all over the place.
We search and run without no goal.
Leave behind not a single trace.

We numb ourselves with cigarettes and hate.
Try to find our way out of our private Kuwait.
Find peace in booze and apathy sex.
Please, have mercy and save these wrecks.

Oh Lord, where in hell did we go wrong?
Where on this earth do we belong?
Shattered souls are screaming loud.
But noone's heard in this lonely crowd.




Poetry by Daybreaker
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Written on 2006-08-22 at 15:11

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Kathy Lockhart
Very powerful poetry! your words are strong and expressive. Excellent write. :) kathy
2006-08-24


Dan Cederholm
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Hey Daybreaker, great write here!!!

And yes, the question is where we go

wrong....? I think we go wrong when

we cant recognise what's right and wrong

hmmm or when we want something egoistic

out from the things we do and say...

I mean that our behaviour not always

do what we meant to do!!!

Regards Dan

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2006-08-22


Kathy Lockhart
visual emotions! We are silenced by the din of the crowd's screaming. We cannot hear ourselves, see ourselves in all that is happening. Well written with much deep meaning. kathy
2006-08-22