yes, the words are backwards, the syntax is backwards, and i wrote it from bottom to top, but it shares a message i think we can all understand.

one word isn't backwards. =)


backwards

"backwards"

.neve hsiramthgin ...dlrow backwards daed
ylsuoires siht ni daed gnivil eht
daed eht lla ta kool ,ylekil si hcihw
sevol eno on fi sseltniop era ,srevol
?od steop od lleh eht tahw ,tcnitxe evol
daed si cigam dna nwod dna pu nehw
siht fo esuaceb ,ylwols os gniyd s'ti ,traeh ym
dna srae dna seye dna nep a htiw ees i
eurt s'ti ebyam ,ssel on ,teop a
yob a tsuj m'i dna ,evila erom ,redrah
retsaf , gnitaeb llits s'enim ,llew dna
eromyna ti leef t'nac i esuaceb
?traeh ruoy ot deneppah tahw
?deneppah tahw
– dna pu dewercs ylsuoires si taht
deirub eht naht daed erom era ew
gnitaebnu era straeh ruo nehw dna
gnihtyreve si ecneics dna gnorw si thgir dna
taht si siht nehw gnorw s'gnihtyreve
,rorrim a fo edis rehto eht no
backwards sevil ruo gnivil ekil s'ti




Poetry by Zachary P. B.
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Written on 2006-08-22 at 22:32

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It makes me spin backward...I understand the flow anyway!!!!good poem!!!!kissess
2006-08-23


Kathy Lockhart
this is outstanding! your point is made in penning the words. It is made powerful by the visual of penning it backwards. In the last days right will be wrong and wrong with be right...and so on. Here we are on the threshold looking into the abyss and the words are flowing backwards! No wonder life does'nt make sense to those who see it with love in their hearts. To spin and spin backwards is the vile! It makes one truly sick. Great, Brilliant, and Profound. kathy
2006-08-22