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Secret

Secret affair of words
The respect that folds the corner of the page
He smiles and reads through once more
He may appear happy,
But buried beneath the blanket of lies, his soul cries out in pain
For he dare not spill this feeling of pressure
So instead he pushes on and swats away this feeling
Like a fly without a purpose
Needed no more
In his life of lies



Poetry by lily vitoria
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Written on 2006-08-24 at 05:13

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Janine>K
I liked this poem... the reader can actually feel the hurt of this person!

"But buried beneath the blanket of lies, his soul cries out in pain"

very strong line

well done!
2006-08-24