he he he good luck understanding it! *lol*


Jazz poem





Elucidation and aspiration
converging alienation
intergration and affirmation

Conversely dialogue

Asceding inextricable obligations
Derogatory cause, asserting inhibition

Conversely dialogue

Reassessment of previous values
Reconstruction of previous deeds
Insertion of variables in the mishap
Versus
Illuminating environmentalism

Conversely dialogue





Poetry by night soul woman The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-08-25 at 09:34

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Judy T Lloyd
You have excellent command of the language. This was very good use of a wordbank.
2006-08-26


Malin Johansson
A great poem here, the headline is so damn good, because this is truly a jazzpoem no melody, no correct understanding feeling, but so damn good!
RGDS
2006-08-25


Dan Cederholm
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Hello NSW!!!

Nice and powerful rythm . . .

It sounds like Rapp or Hipp Hopp to me!!!

But we say it is Jazz, beacuse there is a

form of Jazz that sounds a little bit like

Rapp music!!!

Yes, the words hrrrmmmm . . .

in music all things go together so in music

everything is possible!!!

Regards and hugs to YOU / Dan

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2006-08-25


keith nunes
nice rhythm
2006-08-25