Inspired by another charming new friend as we sat and talked freely beneath the stars.


A special moment


I was so pleased to have met you
to have shared some thoughts in time
to have walked along our riverbank
to hear your heart beat - next to mine.

We had sat beneath the stars with hope
our fears and sorrows for all to see
we talked a while
and shared a smile
then came the moment
for me to leave.

But i will always remember your heart
and so also - should you too!
for when it speaks
it speaks the truth
of all the things
you should say and do.

...and although these tears are so very old
do not dispair for me
for i am always listening to my heart
as i walk to where ever
it may lead.


© Rik - 28/08/2006





Poetry by Rik The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-08-28 at 13:36

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Mr.Mist
Whoa..Im stunned..shure sounds like a special moment...


-mr.m
2006-09-01


Malin Johansson
Beautiful poem here!!!

To have shared some thoughts in time
To hear your heart beat next to mine

I just love thoose two sentences!!!:))))
Regards from Sweden
2006-08-28


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
hey there Rik
this is a joy and so good to see you back man
i missed you quips
well done rgds mike stay around here please
2006-08-28



A delicate text full of tenderness and warmth, and with a rhythm that fits so nicely to the mood!
It is always a joy whenever you show up here, rambling man :)
2006-08-28