This was realy a cool challenge and I like it so much!!!
I have my own studio so I take my guitar disst the sonud
so it sounds a little bit of Trash Blues and the text comes
along when I playd!!! Sincerely Dan



12 o'clock blues (Responding to Mikes Folk Blues Challenge)!!!





Bluesing loosing self control

singing this song

and it aint gone be long

on and on striving

to write this song

melting down all along

Come together in Folk Blues Song




Hitch hiking in my own brain

feeling insane on this bluesy pain

bluesy pain crashing my brain

leaving on blues road

drumming in my veins

out on the scene

In a Folk Blues Song

with so much pain




Out on blues highway with my guitar

I am not a star and I aint got a car

but my song is still ringing

and my guitar is singing

the fuzz is crashing my ears

in 12 o'clock blues with so much fears

Come together in Folk Blues Song




Hitch hiking in my own brain

feeling insane on this bluesy pain

bluesy pain crashing my brain

leaving on blues road

drumming in my veins

out on the scene

In a Folk Blues Song

with so much pain




Poetry by Dan Cederholm
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Written on 2006-08-30 at 10:26

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Rob Graber
"hitchhiking in my brain"--I find that pretty cool!
2006-08-30


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
hey there Dan this is so cool man the response to this has been so good rgds mike
2006-08-30