Love is most powerful in the rain. Semi dedication to Saga, just read and see. : )


Downpour

It was a day I'll never forget
The rain was falling on my window sill
The noise of the city blended
To summon my emotional breakdown

As the cab pulled up to the hotel
I raced downstairs to the lobby
Then out the door into the rain
He exited the cab and I stared into his eyes

All memories of problems passed rose
The look in his eyes was that of happiness and sorrow
My blonde hair was mangled from the downpour
But for those few minutes it didn't exist

I pulled him close and wrapped him in a close embrace
Pleasant memories surrounded us
It was like old times once again
I knew this feeling would soon come to an end

Then we kissed
I wished this exchange was more than empty
He then called for a cab
That was the last time I would ever see him


True love moves without a trace



Poetry by Coolaaron88
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Written on 2006-09-24 at 17:15

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BlueyedSoul
i love rain and using it in a poem always catches my attention...this is sweet and i so agree about the rain and love...it makes for a special moment yes?

good write aaron
~Blue
2006-09-25


Saga
What can I say, but that I'm touched by this, thank you!!!
2006-09-25


F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
this captures a lovely moment, has a mesmerizing sort of effect really... an air of tenderness under the rain... i really liked this... conjures nice thoughts and feelings on my side... well done... :f xx
2006-09-24


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
wow this is a powerful text and so evocative of love
in the rain
i have a poem on the bay called Rainy day Sunday about the end ofd a love affair
rgds mike
2006-09-24


Zoya Zaidi
Yes, downpor of felings can be strong in the rain...
Love,
Zoya
2006-09-24