Found this very illegibly scrawled in my English book. Don't remember when and why i wrote it.


I can feel

I can feel the sea doing things to me
And when I put my head down to rest
I can feel the sea doing things to me
Feelings like I've never felt before,
I can feel it in the depth of me,
I need to get it out
Out there
There's someone who needs me
Who wants me,
Who want to understand me
I can feel the sea doing things to me




Poetry by Parnika
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Written on 2006-09-27 at 18:10

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kayce
This is deep,
Nice work
2006-10-05


Zoya Zaidi
Ahhhhh Parnika, What a poem about premonition!

Welcome to the Bay!

(((hugs)))
Love,
Zoya
2006-09-27


Kathy Lockhart
Oh, I do understand the power, the drawing forth, of the sea within us. This is a very introspective piece written from your heart. Look at it for it shows the deepest part of you. : ) kathy
2006-09-27