A love haiku


Beauty of Flowers by M.A.Meddings

No longer do I
See the beauty of flowers
Excepting of you




Haiku by lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-10-01 at 09:06

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J. E.
I don't understand this haiku stuff, but this must be one of the better! Well written, as always, Mike.
2006-10-02


Kathy Lockhart
this is a beautiful haiku. your talent is truly amazing, Mike. : ) kathy
2006-10-01



Oh yes, you do see the beauty of flowers and all other kinds of beauty around. You see it and transform it into poems!
2006-10-01


Dan Cederholm
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Hey there Mike !!! What a beautiful haiku!

I like the metaphor with flowers!!!

And then there is the conclusion, LOVE!!!

Regards Dan!!!

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2006-10-01


Angelhug
A very cute love haiku. Yet it's a shame you can't see the beauty in flowers ;)
2006-10-01


Silene
Fragile beautiful words, carrying a scent of an english garden...
And the gardener is the keeper of love.
The last romantic hero.
2006-10-01


Zainab
Very attractive haiku
2006-10-01


wee2souls
this write is a passion what true love is
a flower within your love to be...wow..
she bloomed you with every pettle so tender she is to your heart and soul..these few words you wrote..so much meaning..I felt in this.....read
:)
hugs cindy
2006-10-01