another old text of mine,
translated to english...


dreamland

tormented souls
in profound harmony

pure sound

we don't
speek....

do we?

crushing cliffs
night gives
dreams
back
again




Poetry by pettyodd
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Written on 2006-10-21 at 11:36

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kladdpapper
tormented souls crush into cliffs as they search for not found understanding.

I like this poem.

sara.
2006-11-11


Sabrina
Otroligt vacker... jag skulle vilja läsa den på original språket också! :)

*Klem*

Sabrina
2006-11-01


Mark J. Wood
"night gives
dreams
back
again"
and keeps our daytime imprisoned. I find that dreams give us the hope, and the hope gives us the inability to move on. Those last five words are a poem on their own.
2006-10-31


Zachary P. B.
tormented souls without dreams, are imprisoned by the world they search for sympathy in...

great write here, loved it.
z
2006-10-21