feel or not to feel..


the key

Maybe somewhere, someone holds a key, a key too my stonecold heart.

This wall, taken me years too build, its been built on experiences.

When the key draws near , will the wall of stone crumble and fall?
will life slowly return too the dead tissue that is the remains of my so called heart?
Will I allow myself too feel and show what I feel?

How can I? when everytime I have it has only left a deep scar on my fragile heart and soul?

do i have a choice? No on/off button upon me
it would have been so much easier if there were...




Poetry by Patrik Lind
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Written on 2006-10-15 at 20:54

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Zachary P. B.
feel. always choose feel, it's what makes us human, it's what makes us poets... keep that alive.

z
2006-11-10


Cola666
Beautiful. Makes you think...
-Love
2006-11-07


kladdpapper
I know this feeling only too well..
the famous wall.... it protects, but only the fake world inside. One nudge from outside and it crumbles. It's hard though, because usually the wall is built up unconsciously, but at least when you're aware of it you can work on it. but to see reason to work on it is hard, since there is so much pain that can come from getting rid of the wall. Though I guess the only true happiness can be achieved without the wall as well. So I guess you've got to be brave. But it's hard.

very nice poem.
2006-10-20



and neither is there an escape or delete key... on the keyboard of life.

not to feel it seems is feeling with far, far less intensity...
2006-10-16


-Angela
wow.

(speechless)

wow.
2006-10-15