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another different love poem , for Ylvas challenge





totally unexpected

your friendly hand

close my eyes




giving me

the first night

as your other hand

stops the day

between us















Poetry by Lourdes
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Written on 2006-10-19 at 23:29

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lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
this is a lovely poem for the she wolfs challenge rgds mike
2006-10-20


Thomas Selnes The PoetBay support member heart!
Was trying to comment this a few minutes ago. Your writes have the distinct ability to render the reader quite spellbound. Maybe even a bit poleaxed. Thus making it hard to find words for any form or shape of comment after having read them.

I'll just sit here silently and read it a couple times more, if you don't mind. :)
2006-10-20