I was teased recently that my erotic texts weren't raw enough . This old text that had little attention first time around is as raw as it gets. So far!!!!


A Monstrous Beauty by M.A.Meddings

A Monstrous Beauty.

By M.A.Meddings

Momentary madness
Inevitable sadness
The gasping incantations
Of this monstrous love


The helpless adoration
Erectile adulation
The touching brushing fever
Of our parted lips


The tongue tip to tongue
The helpless wrong on wrong
The gentle way we move
Soft your finger tips


The surging dreadful beauty
The ignoring of our duty
The carefree unprotection
Of illicit love


Your gentle silken softness
Your welcome of my harshness
The rapture of the moment
Our bodies come together


The soft cries of pleasure
The yielding of your treasure
The half forgotten vows
Of another love.


The raptured implantation,
The gushing impregnation
The ecstatic monstrous beauty
Of this boundless love.





Poetry by lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-10-20 at 13:24

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kath
This is beautyful and why should beautyful be raw .... I say as Nepenthes ... dont give a damn ... be true to your tender style revealing just as much as to keep the mystery of love ... just that mystical ....

a wonderful write well done
2006-12-28


Phyllis J. Rhodes
Gracious! This gives me the vapors!!
2006-10-20


Lourdes
YESSS !! You blew me away . No Kenny-G.-tunes heard here no !!!
this monstrous beauty becomes you , hero .
Bravo .
2006-10-20


Kathy Lockhart
illicit, explicit, exotic, intoxicating, pleasing, purely raw. : )
2006-10-20


Ian Bowen
Very good, solid piece of writing that left me wanting more.
Ian
2006-10-20



raw silk :)
2006-10-20


keith nunes
hits the spot!
2006-10-20