only another from my book about the thrill and question of your fist tooth you ever lost


First Lost Tooth

it wiggles
it jiggles
makes me giggle
why wont it stop
my tongue moves it around
but it wont come out
the one in front
not in the back
finally
kerrr-plop
it stopped
in my hand
not in my mouth
my first lost tooth
leaves a gap




Poetry by Valerie
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Written on 2006-10-20 at 17:41

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Jessica Rexroat
I've got that tooth somewhere.....
2006-10-21


Lourdes
hehe , you are amazing ! This is the sweetest , coolest write . Welcome to the bay , sweet girl !
2006-10-20


Kathy Lockhart The PoetBay support member heart!
YES! You are goooooooooood!!!
2006-10-20


Phyllis J. Rhodes The PoetBay support member heart!
AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!
2006-10-20